Friday, September 28, 2012

rivalry to revelry part 2

*quick review*
      Vanessa's in the hospital after screaming on the beach, and everyone's now realized that they had no idea why Vanessa was on the beach in the rain.
**if you haven't read the first part, you should check that out first*


Liam, Miley, Josh, all looked at each other while Dr. Martin stood there silently waiting for an answer.
      "It does seem like a really bad idea to be at the beach while it's raining." Said Josh "I honestly don't even really know why we were there."
      "Maybe she was there to meet someone" suggested Miley with her accent
Liam turned to the Dr. "when can we talk to Vanessa?" which he said with his accent
      "You could probably talk to her now" Answered Dr. Martin "I was just wondering if you knew."
      ". . ."
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      ". . ."
      ". . .ok." Said Josh
They all walked into Vanessa's room, their curiosity eating away at their souls. But when they entered the room, the bed was empty, and there was a note on the pillow.
      
         Hello,
             Vanessa fell ill because of me. It had nothing to do with
         Liam and Miley's fish and chips, or Josh's wieners. If you
         want to find her, go to the beach. I've sent someone there
         to wait for you. Just show up, he knows who you are.
         He'll find you. You'd better hurry though, I'm already sick
         of Vanessa.
     
      "To the beach?" Josh asked
      "Let's go!" Miley said enthusiastically and ran out of the room
Liam and Josh followed at a normal pace, but Dr. Martin stayed behind, staring at the floor. And then he stared out the window.
*scene changes to the beach*

      "Where is this guy?" Miley asked annoyed
They had been at the beach for a good 15 minutes. which probably doesn't sound very long but it feels a lot longer when you know someone's waiting for you so they should be there when you get there but they're not and then you're friend is in trouble which is why you had to meet this guy, but he's not there. So it probably felt more like 16 minutes.
     "Maybe it was just a jo-" Josh said but was interrupted by the strangled cry of a young beached whale.
     Liam ran over to help the whale back into the water, but as he approached the whale he heard it say "don't touch me!"with a scottish accent
     ". . .What?" Liam said {don't forget to use everybody's accents}
     "I said don't touch me!" The whale slowly looked at Liam "You're here about Vanessa, right?"
     "Did that whale just-" Josh started (he and Miley had run over a little bit ago)
     "TALK?!" Miley exclaimed
     "No, it was Liam doing an impression of a talking whale." The whale said with heavy sarcasm
There was a very awkward silence, everyone stood around the whale in shock.
     "Well. . ." said the whale "i'm going to assume you're here about Vanessa, if you're not just walk away."
They all continued to stand there so the whale assumed they were. The whale opened his mouth to some degree, and a scottish guy slid out of it's mouth.
     "My name is whale" he said as he walked over to L-J-M (liam josh and miley) "A codename of course, but that's what you're going to call me."
     "Who are you?" Josh asked him
     "I JUST told you who I am," he now adressed the rest of the group "Is he stupid?"
     ". . .yes." Miley answered
     "uuuuuuuuuuuggggghhh! I hate stupid people. You seem like you could possibly be a little smart" He handed Liam a rolled up piece of paper (or, scroll, if you prefer) "This is a map with Vanessa's location, follow it, don't question the people you meet, you'll find her."
     Liam opened the map, and after staring at it for a little bit, L-J-M proceeded to walk 50-ish feet to their right. They now stood in the middle of a dim ally (dim because it was daytime so it wasn't really dark, it was just in the shade.)
     "What do we do now?" Liam asked
A man who looked like he had a lot of money, but was crazy approached them.
    "Heeelllooooo" He said with an irish accent "You're looking for Vanessssssssa, aren't you? Climb up that ladder on your left, she's on the roofffffffffffffffffff."
    ".....Ok." Josh replied
    "Are you stupid?" Miley asked very politely
    "He said not to question the people we met!" Josh said
Miley was about to say something else, probably not politely, but the crazy irish man who had lots of money interrupted.
    "MY NAME IS CONOR!" Conor yelled as he skipped backwards, falling into multiple trash cans/bags
    ".....I'm going up." Liam said, determined.

    When they reached the roof, sure enough, there was Vanessa, sitting on the roof.  And who was with her? The mysterious man who wrote the note.
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Dr. Martin.

     "Dr. Martin?!" Miley asked, astonished.
Dr. Martin's eyes seemed to be holding back the intense emotions of guilt that had probably been building within his soul since he started planning out whatever it is he was currently doing with this mysterious man.
     "Yes." Dr. Martin said "It's me, Steve. And this. . . . . . .this, is. . .Michelle. Hutcherson. She is not a mysterious man."
     "mom.........question mark" Josh said, also astonished.
     "What are you doing with Vanessa?" Liam asked kind of loudly, like when you're trying to be loud and sound intimidating, but you're not. so you just sound silly.
     "I made them." Vanessa said as she stood up, causing an even bigger plot twist
L-J-M just stared at her, so she explained.
     "You're too successful, i have to take out my competition while i'm still crazy."
At this point Josh was just kind of lying down trying to comprehend this betrayal by three people he knew.
But Liam forgot to change.
He was still wearing his sassy pants.
He could still save everyone.
     "I won't let you do this!" Liam said imperatively
Vanessa was about to say something and then probably do something, but another plot twist had arrived.
     "I won't let you do this either." Dr. Martin was truly a great man. "I can't do this, you're a lot younger than me and i'm a Dr."
He pulled out a sedative needle thing, but just the sight of the needle was enough to subdue the currently crazy Vanessa. Bringing back memories of the beach, she fell down as she screamed very loud. unnecessarily loud.
     "I love you Dr. Martin" Liam said with every ounce of feeling left in his pants.

                                             The End

~~~Epilogue~~~

Josh forgave his mom, Dr. Martin went back to doctering and whatever else he does, Liam, Miley, and Josh all became swell friends, and Vanessa was almost cured, but they weren't sure how much longer it would be. I'm sure she'll be fine.
There was a rainbow in the sky.
Liam like rainbows.





~~~i haven't had popcorn in forever~~~


     
          
       

1 comment:

  1. I like all the wierd things that happen to peoples' souls in your stories. But, truthfully, I think Josh is the smart one - - just ask Liam. I like that a mom was in this story - - mom's make everything better.

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